I Should've Been a Better Mother. - Comments

That's good. Also it's good he has nice friends around like you.

I honestly was so shocked by your poem that I forgot how i was mad at my mom and started talking to her quickly again. You never know about tomorrow right? Anything can happen. We can only pray to be guided and helped.

Really nice poem, lol it put me into acting out the morals.

@ discoveringclouds
He's fine.He's still hurt,even though it was years ago,but he's pulling through it.

@ Crashing_Demon_666
True say. It's not bad exactly it's Easier to base stories off of truth though. Hahaha I better not put my fiction in reality. Ill start flying off and won't come back for decades...

I hope your friend is okay.

@ discoveringclouds
Yeah,I understand.I tried to make him forgive her before she died,but he didn't want to so I didn't pester him about it.He's been my only true friend.Writing fiction isn't bad,just as long as you learn to divide it from reality.

@ Crashing_Demon_666
He didn't want to!? Oh God.

That's so horrible. No one will sacrifice as much for a child than their parents. They go hungry so kids can eat and sleepless so children can rest. But the fact that she didn't seem to care could have also been from pain or lack of energy from her cancer developing. That's so sad.

I also write based off other people's experiences hahah. I took most of my stories down until I get then all good again to put up. Truths really make things work better. It doesn't feel bad either. Lol I hate making up lies, but I even have written made up stories. To make up for it I usually just put a good moral in.

@ discoveringclouds
This was an experience from my friend ,his mother didn't even care for him until she had cancer and realized he wasn't gonna miss her,so she tried to make him feel better and beg him for forgiveness,but he didn't want to.

Oh God spare us from such horrible feelings and circumstances!!

That's so sad and depressing. Were you feeling this about your own mother?

I've written poems about my mom before. Well two. One was extremely sweet about how much I love her and another about how I missed having her around as much as she was busy but that ended up a little less angry by the end.

Writin helps be get out my feelings, seems to be working for you too.

@ XX Cookie Monster XX
So sorry if it isn't the best,but inspiration got the best of me,I think.

OMG 0_o

@ ebony_goddess
Thanks!

You're such a great poet. Love it