In the Morning - Comments

defiance. (100)

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of course (:

March 24th, 2013 at 02:08am

sunshinestyles (100)

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i love you, can i use this for a memorial in my school?

March 23rd, 2013 at 05:47pm

IwriteYouFeel (100)

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you're a poet :)

March 20th, 2013 at 01:52pm

Pen'sbestfriend12 (100)

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This was so powerful and I wanted to cry at the end. To tell the narrator that it's ok. I love the repetition that escalated as you went along. Beautiful. Simply beautiful.

March 20th, 2013 at 04:21am

starbella (100)

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wow, this poem is sadly beautiful. Amazing escalation.

March 20th, 2013 at 02:45am