la primera vez / the first time - Comments

@ writingismypassion23 awww thank you! i really appreciate you taking the time to read it :)

@ onlyme_1998 thank you, thank you! :) i appreciate all the feedback! will do! :D

I really love this, its such a true sincere poem. I understand falling in love with written words, because I did as well. Keep writing!(:

This poem has left me SPEECHLESS. It is EXACTLY EVERYTHING I've ever wanted to say. This is my favorite poem on this site EVER. I cannot believe someone has just taken the words right out of my head, you are such a blessed poet! You are so talented! Your poem is original, voiced, quaint, and just down right beautiful. Your work is to perfection and I couldn't grasp how amazing your imagery is. I couldn't help but adore every stanza, this poem says a lot and I'm so glad I read it, it was truly an honor. You have a lot of talent and I absolutely love this poem. I actually adore it :D I would honestly die of happiness if you read my poem "DON'T GIVE IN" and reviewed it, only if you want to of course :D Anyways, a job well done!! I can tell where you are coming from, and that is the true sign of a gifted writer. I feel so honored to have been able to read this! <3

God Bless!

**Olivia**