When Do Angels Recieve Their Sacred Wings? - Comments

I think my favorite thing about this poem is that you didn't just think of angels in the typical way that they are thought of. You talk about how there are angels that are deadlier than an owl and how their wings are a growing evil. Also, when you talk about how they aren't a symbol for peace, but a symbol for war instead. This poem is just so out of the box and not what you would typically think of for angels. This poem was very creative and I really enjoyed reading it! You did an absolutely amazing job with this one!

Wonderful rhyme scheme and organization, it really flows. I like how you illustrated your point, or whatever :)

I find your poem to be insightful, like you're looking into the hearts of man and trying to show them what you see. I feel like you're weaving a story of the monsters of men, that these sacred beautiful things are themselves imperfect, flawed, and dangerous. I especially like your last line, because it leaves me to wonder: why to we climb if we know we are going to fall? And why do we continue to do it?