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  • AngelicWasteland;

    AngelicWasteland; (100)

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    Very Happy Thank you!
    April 9th, 2013 at 12:58am
  • Rosi S Phillips

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    Love it! You rhyme but not to the point that you're forcing them. The first 2 stanzas are phenomenal, it feels like you could be having a conversation with someone. Fabulous poem! Well done!
    April 9th, 2013 at 12:57am
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