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AngelicWasteland; (100)

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Thank you!

April 9th, 2013 at 12:58am
Rosi S Phillips (100)

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Love it! You rhyme but not to the point that you're forcing them. The first 2 stanzas are phenomenal, it feels like you could be having a conversation with someone. Fabulous poem! Well done!

April 9th, 2013 at 12:57am

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