Falling to the depths of despair - Comments

Writer in the Rye (100)

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WOW! wowwwww. You are so talented! Your poem is original, voiced, quaint, and just down right beautiful. Your work is to perfection and I couldn't grasp how amazing your imagery is. I couldn't help but adore every stanza, this poem says a lot and I'm so glad I read it, it was truly an honor. You have a lot of talent and I absolutely love this poem. I actually adore it :D I would honestly die of happiness if you read my poem "HOPELESSLY PATIENT" and reviewed it, only if you want to of course :D Anyways, a job well done!!

God Bless!

**Olivia**

April 12th, 2013 at 01:53am

jalex_is_life (100)

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thank you, I highly appreciate it!

April 11th, 2013 at 04:40pm

Rosi S Phillips (100)

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FI can certainly feel your emotions in this peice. I especially lilt the line, "everything's moving with no place to go." You're a good poet, and I can't wait to read more of your poetry! Please keep writing!
-Rosi

April 11th, 2013 at 09:11am