April 14th, 2013 at 07:30am
Dear tmolls,
I would say thank you for writing and posting this poem. I do believe that in time, after you go back review and edit, it can be a stunning piece. Also in the sixth line I think you meant "off" and not "of. Also If you are capitalizing each letter that begins the line, please make sure you continue the theme throughout. But overall I liked your poem, and thought it reflected your feeling towards this "muse" well.
Please keep wiring. :)
-Rosi
thanks a lot, and for the advice :)