first submission - Comments

WOW! wowwwww. You are so talented! Your poem is original, voiced, quaint, and just down right beautiful. Your work is to perfection and I couldn't grasp how amazing your imagery is. I couldn't help but adore every stanza, this poem says a lot and I'm so glad I read it, it was truly an honor. You have a lot of talent and I absolutely love this poem. I actually adore it :D I would honestly die of happiness if you read my poem "DON'T GIVE IN" and reviewed it, only if you want to of course :D Anyways, a job well done!! I feel so honored to have been able to read this! <3

God Bless!

**Olivia**

Wow, this is excellent! I actually thought this was written by someone much older because of the style (and the alcohol references) so I'm not sure if you consider that a compliment or not but I really liked this!
Like the person below me said, the message is sad but it was written well.
I like the simplicity of your writing :)

Sad story, good poem! (:( (It's a happy and a sad)

Just remember that there are never answers at the bottom of a bottle, and trying to find one is as impossible as winning her back :/

Stay strong, Dekker! :)