Don't Give In - Comments

@ livelovelaugh.pa
Awe thank you so, so much for your kind words! They mean the world!

God Bless!

xoxo

Hello. So, I know it takes me a while to reply to things, sorry for that. But I love this, I really do. It's calm and it flows beautifully! I love how well it connects to real world problems and the way it connects. Some people are afraid to admit their faith, let alone embrace it, so something like this really empowers. I absolutely love the vocab you've used, it's not just thrown it there, it flows and belongs. A true writer knows how to use words and where to use them and you my friend have done it!
- Polly

ps. Thanks so much for the comment :)

Hello. So, I know it takes me a while to reply to things, sorry for that. But I love this, I really do. It's calm and it flows beautifully! I love how well it connects to real world problems and the way it connects. Some people are afraid to admit their faith, let alone embrace it, so something like this really empowers. I absolutely love the vocab you've used, it's not just thrown it there, it flows and belongs. A true writer knows how to use words and where to use them and you my friend have done it!
- Polly

ps. Thanks so much for the comment :)

@ emocarebear
Ah! I totally forgot I even wrote this poem! Thank you SO MUCH!!

God Bless!

xoxo

This poem is AMAZING I love it

Beautifully written, as all your work is! You really do have a special talent with using such elegant words to describe life. Brilliant stuff!

While I may not be religious, I understand the meaning of the poem and the important part that meaning plays in our lives. You did a good job. The poem is actually very catchy too.

@ Monstertea
Oh my gosh! That truly mean the world to me! I am my own worst critic, so hearing that means so incredibly much to me! thank you, and God Bless!

the passion in the words the way each stanza adds to the last every word is filled with the emotion you were so amazingly writing about. Bravo just great work you are a true writer this shows the talent that flows within you. thank you for gracing us with your work .

Wow this is amazing, truly uplifting for anyone feeling down! I knew your stuff would be perfect ;)

That is really good, im not a very religious person but that was just amazing you are a really gifted girl and do not stop writing no matter what, and thanks for the sweet words on my poem.

Its really nice, i can really relate to your words and it kept me thinking too. Actually i read it 3 times haha its pretty accurate in the way i tell myself to think, you are a very gifted writer.

I loved this!:)

This is amazing!!! Great job! And thanks for the comment on my poem means a lot :)

@ LostTenshiYuki
Ahh!! I'm just speechless!! Thank you so much!! <3

Wow, I like it. And that says a lot because I'm really critical when it comes to poetry.

But no seriously, it was well-written and it flowed. Great rhymes and colorful use of vocabulary. Not to mention very motivational.

This is really good! Very beautiful and very well-written. Good job!

I love this poem it really speaks! you are awsome :) very verbose....Keep up the awsome work ( p.s. You've gained a new #1 Fan! :P)

Very well written, fantastic vocabulary, and true.
Never stop writing, you clearly have a passion and talent for it.

this is really great. I really loved this :)