Don't Give In - Comments

  • WhoKnowsWhoIAm

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    This is amazing, you're very talented!
    April 15th, 2013 at 06:25am
  • Reverse Star

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    Very nice
    It's a nice change of pace from my gloomy poems, lol
    Some nice wordage and structure, though it does seem to drop off near the end just a smidge, but it doesn't affect much
    Never been much of a fan of pure rhyming, but you work it out very well
    In all, a very enjoyable piece - Good job !
    April 15th, 2013 at 05:30am
  • Take_Me

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    I like this a lot :) Very inspiring and uplifting, well done! And thanks for commenting on my poem!
    April 15th, 2013 at 04:54am
  • raja sahara

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    This is beautiful and very empowering. Plus, I love rhyme schemes. Great job! :)
    April 15th, 2013 at 04:14am
  • obliviate

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    This is amazing. You have such great writing skills! :) I really like this, it's perfection beyond belief. Keep writing! :)
    April 15th, 2013 at 03:59am
  • DesmondTiny

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    This poem is very beautiful! It gives inspiration and hope which is truly amazing! Wonderful job! :)
    April 15th, 2013 at 03:58am