Oh But She Was Beautiful - Comments

Invisible Princess (100)

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@ writingismypassion23
thanks.

April 16th, 2013 at 02:59am

Writer in the Rye (100)

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My comment was copied onto this poem too, I am upset, why did it do that?? Lol this site is being dumb :(
Lol anyways, for my REAL REVIEW: I thought this was so spectacular, the words flowed so nicely and I really enjoyed how you spaced it, made it easy to read!

April 16th, 2013 at 02:48am

Writer in the Rye (100)

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WOW! wowwwww. You are so talented! Your poem is original, voiced, quaint, and just down right beautiful. Your work is to perfection and I couldn't grasp how amazing your imagery is. I couldn't help but adore every stanza, this poem says a lot and I'm so glad I read it, it was truly an honor. You have a lot of talent and I absolutely love this poem. I actually adore it :D I would honestly die of happiness if you read my poem "DON'T GIVE IN" and reviewed it, only if you want to of course :D Anyways, a job well done!! I can tell where you are coming from, and that is the true sign of a gifted writer. I feel so honored to have been able to read this! <3

God Bless!

**Olivia**

April 16th, 2013 at 02:46am