Red Marks the Spot. - Comments

Wincest_Lover (100)

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@ Smackababy
Oh yeah,you're right! Thanks :D

April 25th, 2013 at 07:26pm

Smackababy (100)

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Use more commas! It would make it creepier :3

April 25th, 2013 at 07:25pm

Wincest_Lover (100)

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@ Smackababy
Yeah,it's supposed to be as if it's talking to you.I made this on the spot and it was very late at night.Although I like it,I must say I have better poems.Thanks for the review :)
PD:Any constructive criticism will help me a lot. :D

April 25th, 2013 at 07:23pm

Smackababy (100)

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S'creepy, but not bad.

I'm curious who's being spoken to, is it me?

April 25th, 2013 at 07:20pm

Wincest_Lover (100)

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@ xXTooOldToDieYoungXx
HELL YES YOU DID!! MAYBE THE WHOLE WEEK!I love when people comment on my work,it makes me feel like I'm not just writing to myself.

April 25th, 2013 at 07:16pm

xXTooOldToDieYoungXx (100)

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IT'S OKAY! YELLING IS FFUUN!
I CAN'T BELIEVE I MADE YOUR DAY. :D

April 25th, 2013 at 07:14pm

Wincest_Lover (100)

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@ xXTooOldToDieYoungXx
Thank you so so so much!! YOU JUST MADE MY DAY!! <---- Sorry for yelling :D

April 25th, 2013 at 07:02pm

xXTooOldToDieYoungXx (100)

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This is great!

April 25th, 2013 at 06:57pm