April 25th, 2013 at 07:26pm
Red Marks the Spot. - Comments
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Use more commas! It would make it creepier :3April 25th, 2013 at 07:25pm
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@ Smackababy
Yeah,it's supposed to be as if it's talking to you.I made this on the spot and it was very late at night.Although I like it,I must say I have better poems.Thanks for the review :)
PD:Any constructive criticism will help me a lot. :DApril 25th, 2013 at 07:23pm -
S'creepy, but not bad.
I'm curious who's being spoken to, is it me?April 25th, 2013 at 07:20pm -
@ xXTooOldToDieYoungXx
HELL YES YOU DID!! MAYBE THE WHOLE WEEK!I love when people comment on my work,it makes me feel like I'm not just writing to myself.April 25th, 2013 at 07:16pm -
IT'S OKAY! YELLING IS FFUUN!
I CAN'T BELIEVE I MADE YOUR DAY. :DApril 25th, 2013 at 07:14pm -
@ xXTooOldToDieYoungXx
Thank you so so so much!! YOU JUST MADE MY DAY!! <---- Sorry for yelling :DApril 25th, 2013 at 07:02pm -
This is great!April 25th, 2013 at 06:57pm
Oh yeah,you're right! Thanks :D