Cherishing Agony. - Comments

UnearthlyDesire (150)

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@ Ashley Asphyxiation
Thanks :)

January 27th, 2014 at 05:28pm

genocideforjenny (100)

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Perfection. Love the style.

January 24th, 2014 at 09:14am

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@ Forbidden_Samurai
Gladly. :)

Your comment means more than you could ever realize right now...I'm really, TRULY grateful. Rarely do I get comments upon my poetry -thanks again!

April 27th, 2013 at 04:22am

Forbidden_Samurai (100)

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Wow...
For once I'm for a loss of words and critiques. What an amazing piece and in such a difficult style of poetry! I am in awe of such talent. Such elegance and power in your word choice! And I absolutely love the title!!
Okay, perhaps I have one critique after all. In your first stanza you use the word "liveth" which is wonderful, but it's alone. You don't continue with this older style of speaking throughout the poem, but I love the fact that you tried to use it.
I look forward to reading more pieces by you!
~Keep writing!!

April 27th, 2013 at 03:28am