Color Confusion - Comments

This is a really intriguing piece! I enjoyed reading every line and stanza, you managed to capture the feel of those days where things feel so off perfectly. I have just a few constuctive critiques: 1) there are places in your piece where the flow of words is interupted and detracts a bit from the strength of your piece and 2) I don't feel your title is the best fit for your piece. When I saw the title I actually thought your piece was going to be about something completely different.
Aside from those two things, you did an awsome job!! I look forward to reading more from you!
~Keep reading!!

@ LostTenshiYuki
I was trying to really get people thinking of those days you are so confused it's like you dont event know what to think about and I'm glad you like it, I love getting comments on my work, its so great to know what you think. Thank you!

Wow! this is really confusing. But very thought evoking...I Like it! I understand what it means but it makes me confused about my own days.