The Welcoming of Spring - Comments

I love the opening line. I don't have the words that can fathom how much I love it. It's so simple, with such simplicity and yet it paints a gorgeous picture, as if I am actually there. So inspiring!

"A whimsical smile to welcome spring". Perfect beyond words. I really loved your poem!

The kiss of the sun on my lips is the best line that I have read in your poem. It was both lovely and unique! Your choice of words kept me surprised by how good you are as a poet.

Love the imagery in this poem. Especially like the metaphor "pregnant pause. nice peom