I love the opening line. I don't have the words that can fathom how much I love it. It's so simple, with such simplicity and yet it paints a gorgeous picture, as if I am actually there. So inspiring!
May 7th, 2013 at 11:02am
The Welcoming of Spring - Comments
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"A whimsical smile to welcome spring". Perfect beyond words. I really loved your poem!May 3rd, 2013 at 08:01am
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The kiss of the sun on my lips is the best line that I have read in your poem. It was both lovely and unique! Your choice of words kept me surprised by how good you are as a poet.May 1st, 2013 at 08:08pm
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Love the imagery in this poem. Especially like the metaphor "pregnant pause. nice peomMay 1st, 2013 at 03:50pm
