The First Feather - Comments

  • maus.

    maus. (400)

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    It's truly amazing how a few lines strung together can form an image in your head. It's honestly the greatest thing about language. This piece is a prime example. It isn't constricted to any rules and yet it makes more sense than anything. It's lovely.
    May 7th, 2013 at 11:13am
  • a mimosa pudica

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    I admire this poem. I like free-verse poems the most because you can put a lot of emotion in a verse.

    This is one of the many proofs I have why free-verse poems are wonderful and extraordinary.
    May 5th, 2013 at 05:08pm