Your poem is so deep and original. I love the way you've written it, the words to describe the setting and the format you've used which totally fit the scene. It's beautiful, really.
The ending was ground-breaking. I truly felt the way Alice has felt. Reading your poem was exciting and thrilling for me and it just ended so suddenly. There is no other way to end it than you did.
This new take for an Alice in Wonderland poem was brilliant and I recommend you for that.
The ending was ground-breaking. I truly felt the way Alice has felt. Reading your poem was exciting and thrilling for me and it just ended so suddenly. There is no other way to end it than you did.
This new take for an Alice in Wonderland poem was brilliant and I recommend you for that.