Wow, I really enjoyed reading this poem. I love how you took something as vast as the night sky and the stars and described it in this poem - and you did a beautiful job at that. I like how you talk about the sound of the stars, because I don't think I've ever thought about stars having a sound before - that was definitely the line that made me think the most, and it was definitely my favorite in the poem! Overall I think you did a fantastic job writing this and I really enjoyed reading it. It was amazing!
May 30th, 2014 at 10:28pm