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  • ninahx

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    @ AutumnBrooks Thank you so much!(: <3
    July 13th, 2013 at 10:47pm
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    Wow. This is very well written. I really enjoyed the imagery. You set up a scenario but allowed the reader to still create their own picture. It is very reflective. There is something sad yet inspiring about this poem. My favorite line was "Kiss me and think about her". It was an almost haunting shift in the reader's understanding. Beautifully done!
    July 13th, 2013 at 08:49pm
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