This poem reminds me of summer romance. It reminds me of the nights you and your lover go out late at night and find each other tangled in one another's sheets and every single touch lights up your body like electricity and that's perfectly displayed here. I also love how you put god you in italics because it REALLY emphasizes how much this person loves the other and how much the person the narrator is speaking of means to the narrator. Every line of this poem means so much just like all of your other lovely pieces, and this is definitely one of my favorites that I have read.
The only thing I don't like is that you numbered the title instead of just putting a title like "You" or "Sun-Chapped Lips" or "Eager Fingers." Anything like that I personally thing would look better than the numbers but that's just my opinion!
The only thing I don't like is that you numbered the title instead of just putting a title like "You" or "Sun-Chapped Lips" or "Eager Fingers." Anything like that I personally thing would look better than the numbers but that's just my opinion!
Of course lovely work :)!