@ Donoso Well, thank you. I've probably got more up my sleeve, but I'm kind of a one-song bird, sadly. Most of my poems all sound about the same. This sonnet, however, was missing a line (third from the last). I fixed it. Sounds better and follows the rules now. lol
see i wish i could write like that like you, you say sometimes everything im thinking but i cant write it down and put it into words as you do. Love these types of poems
Well, thank you. I've probably got more up my sleeve, but I'm kind of a one-song bird, sadly. Most of my poems all sound about the same. This sonnet, however, was missing a line (third from the last). I fixed it. Sounds better and follows the rules now. lol