June 6th, 2013 at 04:26pm
@ hunterzane4
I might have to try that!
This Girl I See - Comments
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June 6th, 2013 at 04:24pm
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@ DamagedSoul
I always do it!!!:) just combine different ideas
June 6th, 2013 at 04:23pm -
@ hunterzane4
thats actually a really good idea!June 6th, 2013 at 04:21pm -
@ DamagedSoul
Then don't ever change it! Write a different version of it and collaborate the two!
June 6th, 2013 at 04:19pm -
@ hunterzane4
Thanks(: haha i actually dont edit normally though. I hate when i write and then i change it because i feel like its a forced change and i dont like the ending flow.June 6th, 2013 at 04:18pm -
@ hunterzane4
Thanks(: haha i actually dont edit normally though. I hate when i write and then i change it because i feel like its a forced change and i dont like the ending flow.June 6th, 2013 at 04:18pm -
I truly enjoyed this piece, wouldn't change it. You seem to be editing nicely, wording perfectly:) besides you can't judge poetry, either you relate and like it or you have no idea what's going on, I like this piece and look forward to reading more from you June 6th, 2013 at 04:16pm
Doooo it