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  • Mama_Hen58

    Mama_Hen58 (100)

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    @ FloatingInThePast
    Thank you so much! It really means a lot to means a lot to me!!
    June 5th, 2013 at 06:52pm
  • FloatingInThePast

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    This poem is gorgeous! I love how the tempo seems to pick up at the end through the repetition of "they" and the last line abruptly stops the pattern. This technique does much to drive your point home:).
    June 5th, 2013 at 04:09pm
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