Ending Light - Comments

The first stanza literally just game me goosebumps. Your poetry writing talents are making me jealous. Like really do you try to be that awesome or does it just come naturally?

This poem was really strong, and desperate. I think that even though in this poem love is said to be a lie, the person still misses love. That's how I feel because of the first line of the third verse. And the last line is amazing. It gave me chills! Great job.