Bone Marrow - Comments

What I always love about your poems is that they flow together so beautifully and not one bit of it seems forced. I wish you'd write a huge poetry piece based off of one idea because I think I'd cry of joy.

Wow surprising that I really love this poem. I LOVE ALL OF THEM SO MUCH IT HURTS ME OKAY?!

I love how you described this person as "moondrop" instead of saying "boy" "girl" or another predictable pronoun. I also love how you said tethered because that means forever; that means it's never moving and that's honestly how love is. It attaches to every inch of you and no matter what happens to you and that person; the tie stays forever. So, I definitely love this poem. No surprise there haha.

LISA THIS IS SO GORGEOUS AND YOU AND YOUR GIRLFRIEND ARE THE BEST EVER I LOVE YOU BOTH

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I am a big fan of haiku and I've read lots of them. I am always happy to find a new haiku. They are so short, yet always so powerful. This was, too. This was strong and emotional, and it means different things to different people. The title was interesting and absolutely great, as well as the first like. I just loved it. And the last line gives this the hint of mystery! I wish there were more haiku, perhaps you'll write more soon?(: I loved this. I recommended it!