How could this possibly ever suck? This poem was beautiful in its own way. It was, of course, very unique and personal and very powerful. You didn't write straightly about love, or death or anything, but you used a kind of symbolism and hid your message behind words that give it the mystique. Great. And I think we can all figure out what this means to us. I could relate to this and it was a slight bit scary but the last lines give it a touch of hope. Beautiful.
June 7th, 2013 at 02:17pm