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Strength is Not the Man with a Gun in His Hand, But the Man Who Keeps Strong Within. - Comments

  • Lexiehobitlee

    Lexiehobitlee (100)

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    Okay thanks ^_^
    June 28th, 2013 at 01:01am
  • a mimosa pudica

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    The concept of the poem is really good but perhaps alter the lines a little bit? I got confused with them because there were words that weren't exactly in their proper places.
    June 27th, 2013 at 04:54pm
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