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greendaychic
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thanks for any tips, it shall be changed from a ballad in due course... or possibly deleted, cause I dont like it.
July 14th, 2013 at 08:31am
Graffiti Kid
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The rhyme scheme isn't very clear, and the meter is off for a ballad.
Here's
a link for a ballad scheme.
July 12th, 2013 at 11:05pm
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