Well this poem was nothing short of amazing. It almost reminds me of Inception in a way, how at the end we don't really know if he is asleep or awake, and the narrator of the poem doesn't really know if they are alive or dead. I really love the line where you talked about how the narrator could see a light but it didn't lead them out of wherever they are. It really makes me wonder what the light that the narrator saw really was. This is a really deep poem and I really like how there are so many elements to it Great job!
Thank you so much it means a lot to me that you like my poem :)