Reality is Just a Dream - Comments

@swell thanks so much. I just got started into poetry. Honestly that comment made me feel good about it.

I have to say, this was heartbreakingly realistic and I love how bluntly you've approached the situation that reality and dreaming are two different things. We basically want what we can't have and we end up getting the opposite of what we wanted, which is so relatable to anyone really, out there. I like the reference about wanting to live happy ever after, like in a dream state or something, but then you say that we won't get that because we'll probably be locked up in a tower (Rapunzel is one of my favourite princesses so I'm glad you referenced her!). Overall, I think you captured the reality theme nicely. Good job!