The red river - Comments

@ swell
Thank you that actually makes me feel good inside, and the song is just something i put because music to me is everything i i was hoping to add it x

I have to say, when I saw the title being the red river I thought of a period Since that's what I call mine when it comes every month 'the red river is flowing for me this month'

As I read the poem though, I realise how stupid my assumption is and this is so sad. I feel like most if not all people can relate to the feeling of broken love and losing someone so important to you that it just breaks you down completely. I especially like the comparison of the heart beating as though it's learning a song, I thought that was beautiful.

Too soon the heart downs do you mean, the heart drowns or?

Overall, I liked this!