Wow, I really loved reading this. I think you captured the essence of high school cliques and the negative side of it really well. I loved how in the beginning of the poem you described how girls work in said cliques in almost a positive way but then it's like 'oh wait, no, they're naturally beautiful but it's underneath all the make up they put on'. I liked the twist you put on by telling the mothers in a sarcastic sort of way the truth behind high school cliques and I guess how poisonous they can be. You put your own spin on high school and made it really interesting to read. Good job!
July 17th, 2013 at 07:28am