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  • youburnfirst

    youburnfirst (100)

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    Love this :) I love the way it is formatted. Where you cut the lines adds pause to the poem and forces the reader to slow down, adding to the need to slow down time and take a break ^^;
    July 19th, 2013 at 11:41pm
  • laredo.

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    Gurrrrl, you are in a word: gorgeous. And a fantastic poet. I adore the words, the layout, and how it all ties together to truly make me feel serene. Good job. :)
    July 19th, 2013 at 06:06pm
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