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@ a mimosa pudica
Thank you very much.... I like writing poetry

July 20th, 2013 at 07:38pm
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Nice way of writing this poem. You used metaphors that give such a very good comparison between two contrasting things.

The best verse for me was the second one.

July 20th, 2013 at 06:08pm
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@ youburnfirst
Thank you

July 20th, 2013 at 12:16am
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I love the last verse :)

July 19th, 2013 at 11:39pm

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