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    @ a mimosa pudica
    Thank you very much.... I like writing poetry Very Happy
    July 20th, 2013 at 07:38pm
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    Nice way of writing this poem. You used metaphors that give such a very good comparison between two contrasting things.

    The best verse for me was the second one. tehe
    July 20th, 2013 at 06:08pm
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    @ youburnfirst
    Thank you Smile
    July 20th, 2013 at 12:16am
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    I love the last verse :)
    July 19th, 2013 at 11:39pm
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