Fighters Rise - Comments

This is really good! I feel like it's about people losing a battle against themselves or the world but in the end they stand strong. The way you worded it and the way some of it rhymes is very unique too. I feel like this came from deep within you. Nice work!

@ a mimosa pudica
Hey there! Thank you for the comment and I'm glad you enjoyed the poem

This poem is like WOW. I am very very very impressed with this poem because the topic is unique and original. You don't always get to see poems that speak more than just love, break-up and personal things here. I'm glad to have found this one because you've gone beyond something than just the normal here in the poem section. You've created something unexpected and beautiful.

This poem is very tragic but speaks more than just a war but a war that we all battle within ourselves. This may not be the reason why you wrote this poem but I believe that this poem has a deeper meaning. The denotation is literal but there's a lot of connotations here that I applaud you for.