First of all; Good poems are always confusing. I hate poems that are too direct. I need to use my imagination. I see it as a sign for a good poem if I had to read it at least twice. I love the title, the touch of uniqueness and mystery. A unique title is the most important thing in poems. And well, this poem gave your title a meaning! I loved it. It was strong, it was meaningful, basically the whole life in one poem. Wow. And well, I loved the mental image of comparing life into lyrics. It's just great! Keep up the good work!(: <3 Xx Ninahx