This poem was extremely emotional, strong, unique and very beautiful. It made me feel a bit lonely and sad, but also happy. I had to read it a few times to really understand it, and all I can say is that I enjoyed reading every word of it. You clearly have a gift of expressing strong emotions trough poems because I could see all of those emotions hidden behind your lines. I loved the way you described certain things, such as "You watch trough slits of painful blackness, As the sun disappears before your eyes."
Its nothing special. Im thankful you read and liked my poem :)