Aw, this was sad, but I really liked it. I think that feeling of letting someone down is something we can all relate to, as well as having those bad habits we all want to break, yet we keep repeating it and we don't know why. (Or maybe we do, but we just don't want to admit it). I like how you begin quite sad and melancholy but then by the end of the poem, you almost sound bitter, in a way? Like you had hoped more for yourself but then not only have you disappointed others, but you've disappointed yourself. That has to be one of the worst feelings. Overall, I really liked this!
July 26th, 2013 at 06:36am