I am Afraid - Comments

  • SonOfStars

    SonOfStars (100)

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    This piece is definitely relatable. Especially because this was me about a year ago. Looking back though, it wasn't as bad as I was worried it would be. Hope it turns out the same for you.

    Also, I really liked the last five lines. Pensive. Almost quieter than the rest of the poem. They make a nice ending. (Although, I'm not sure if it should be "run" or "ran" in the last line.)
    August 1st, 2013 at 10:03am