August 4th, 2013 at 08:05pm
And I have to say that you've started off extremely well! I really liked this poem. The adjectives are so powerful and meaningful that they really do provoke emotion in me as you debate over what freedom really is. It's a perfect subject to express in a poem, and I truly think it's amazing. I simply have to recommend this, if I didn't, it really wouldn't be fair seeing as this is such a good piece of work. I look forward to seeing more pieces of writing from you, keep up the amazing work!
Thanks you so much! That means so much to me!