The Peace of the Forest - Comments

Thank you for the compliment. I do agree with you. The third stanza did seem to be off, so I fixed it. If you want, you can now check the err. I hasn't changed much. Thank you again. I appreciate it.

I really like the first two stanzas. Especially the second one. The third stanza doesn't have the same rhythm. I am not sure if it is intentionally done. I think I am in love with the second stanza to where the rest does not even matter.