Silent Screams - Comments

I agree completely.

Loved your poem but really abortion is sick and stupid it should be illegal your fucking killing a living thing. if your to young either dont be silly and wrap up your willy or take responsibilty or hears the real answer NO FUCKING SEX at all at that age.

Loved your poem but really abortion is sick and stupid it should be illegal your fucking killing a living thing. if your to young either do be silly and wrap up your willy or take responsibilty or hears the real answer NO FUCKING SEX at all at that age.

Thank you :) Your comprehension of the poetry is spot-on.

This poem was really sad, and I could see all the emotion in it. I like that you told it as a story, while still giving a very clear message in it as well. I feel bad for little baby Lilly, because she'll never be born or grow up or get to live at all, and the way everyone was talking about her like she was a mistake was really sad, too. I think the way the doctor performed the abortion was really sad, because you could just tell that it was a routine thing. I think this is a very good poem about abortion and I really enjoyed reading it.