Coldness Running Dry. - Comments

UnearthlyDesire (150)

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@ joyofthekill
I will. :) And thanks...ill admit you arent the first one to mention such a thing. I just dont see my poetry as overly distinct or of any real worth...

October 23rd, 2013 at 12:21am

joyofthekill (100)

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Please submit this to some type of writing contest-- Please. This is, if I could take the words out of the last comment a VERY strong poem. I can feel the emotion coming out of this, just through description. Something that a lot of writers on this site tend to neglect is the use of color in their writing... at least vividly. And you do it so well, you have a gift.

October 21st, 2013 at 08:53am

creatureofthedark (100)

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This is a very strong poem. I really love your word usage.

August 9th, 2013 at 09:03am