This is absolutely perfect. I've been reading a lot of your poetry and I must say you've written some of the best haiku's I've ever read. You are bloody brilliant!
September 20th, 2013 at 08:15am
I absolutely love this poem. It's easily one of my favorite on the entire website. Plus, the layout is so lovely :)!
I just love how amazing you worded it and how lovely it flowed together.
I definitely know what it's like to have someone reassure you time and time again that what they were doing was the truth but then they turn around and use actions that don't match the talking one bit and it is like a big gunshot to the heart which you portrayed perfectly in this haiku. Amazing job!