The End and Her End - Comments

@ midnight sunshine x
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Wow. Just wow. The imagery is so vivid and it's so powerful. The words and descriptions you have used bring across so much emotion and it tells a story. this is beautiful and absolutely amazing :-)

@ Lovenature24
Oh my gosh your comment absolutely made my day thank you SO SO SO much!!! :)

God Bless!!

I'm not sure what you as the author got from it personally but I myself took it this way:

I think it's well written and vividly portrayed. I do not think all age groups would be able to connect with it due to vocabulary so it may reach a small audience.

The message I got personally was sad I do see how it could represent the basIc end of a good book she really connect with, but to me it felt it was so personal that in my own head I was thinking like this book is actually her life story and now she's dead/gonna die.

Sorry for errors everything I do is done on a mobile device.

This is absolutely lovely. :)