Wow. Just wow. The imagery is so vivid and it's so powerful. The words and descriptions you have used bring across so much emotion and it tells a story. this is beautiful and absolutely amazing :-)
I'm not sure what you as the author got from it personally but I myself took it this way:
I think it's well written and vividly portrayed. I do not think all age groups would be able to connect with it due to vocabulary so it may reach a small audience.
The message I got personally was sad I do see how it could represent the basIc end of a good book she really connect with, but to me it felt it was so personal that in my own head I was thinking like this book is actually her life story and now she's dead/gonna die.
Sorry for errors everything I do is done on a mobile device.
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